Okay Chaddy, just starting a new thread for any discussion on your 'new' Bryak.
I see that you had a look and obviously it appears that you are okay with the changes.
One major change was you 'Lore Scrolls'. It was FAR too powerful granting Advantage for ALL Research rolls - and it doesn't make sense anyway. (Even a library wouldn't do that - that is the idea of the Ability/Specialty itself - to use the library).
Anyway, I made it similar to what it was in SW - a back-up for times when you might not know something. (ie untrained). So you always get a d4 Specialty die when consulting them. If your own knowledge is greater in a particular area, then you just use your Specialty die.
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