Pretty good. I like the no column lines of the Abilities and Weapon tables. :)
1. Remove the Charisma brown box.
Doy! Done.
2. Remove the 'extra edge' frm 0XP. You don't get that anymore. Just write "All starting Advances spent" or something. (You don't have to remove an Edge, as you now get a 2nd Ability at d8 when start. If you took the extra d8, then you will need to lose 1 Advance from somewhere).
Yep. Realized that after posting it and already altered.
3. I can't remember what you have before, but if you don't want Brawny I am sure there is another Entry Edge for it. (Maybe Hard to Kill or something)?
It was 'Iron Jaw' beforehand. I kind of like having Brawny - not that he's overly bulky, just stubborn as all hell. I think Brawny kind of fits, and at some point I'm probably going to want to take Iron Jaw again.
4. Arcane resistance is no longer for free as a Dwarven Trait. It is on the racial TT list though. So if you want it you have to spend an Advance on it. (remove from green AND red section).
Was weighing up whether I should take that as an edge/disadvantage combo. Think I'll lose it for now, I don't know that it's really been very prominent with him.
5. Add Dwarf to your available TTs.
Again, doy!
6. See new Advancement chart - it lists what you can do with Advancements. Up to you whether you want that on PC sheet.
I might be confused here. Is this simply the: a) increase an ability, b) increase 2 specialties or c) buy an edge? That one I don't think I need on the character sheet. If you're wondering about my working at the bottom, it was just so that I could keep track of exactly what I had done so it would be easier to fix if I'd gotten something wrong.
Or is there another chart somewhere else that I'm missing?
7. Does Cleric Edge (and I would just call it that now - no Arcane BG stuff which confuses 'sourses of magic') grant access to Arcana TT too? I will have to check.
Adjusted now to just 'Cleric' edge. And yes, it does grant access to Aracana! Didn't even consider that. There are actually a couple there that Arkin would consider too.
8. You may wish to add shield to weapons chart. Shields are a Fighting Group and listed as such on the Weapon Properties doc. Check your shield has the right adjustments. I think I altered slightly, with adding new shields.
Yow. I didn't look too closely at the shields you added. Good thing you pointed that out, cause it *was* all over the place. Was a large shield in his equipment, with the ranged benefits of a medium and the melee benefits of a small. ??? Changed it to a medium shield. All stats now aligned.
Thanks for that. You can keep changing Arkin. I will now work on Awareness and Tough TTs, though I think I added the latter last night. :)
Yes, Tough TT was done. Fortune was the other one. :)
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